Wheel’s Thread8

PUDDLE  and          CRUMBS                                               8 SENTENCES 

First Day

1You find that you have more difficulty than she did. 2Whereas she skipped into Kindergarten with a flick of her ponytail and a slight wave goodbye over her shoulder, you hesitate on the porch, your key a jagged thing in your hand.

3When you go inside, the house is empty. 4There will be no distractions and interruptions today.

5Finding the Lysol and Windex and a roll of paper towels, you set out to take care of the dust and stains, but it’s the silence that you want to scour away.

6In the kitchen you find a puddle of milk and a dusting of toast crumbs on the table and you turn away.

7That, you leave. 8Until she comes home.

~ by bretwheel on June 28, 2007.

One Response to “Wheel’s Thread8”

  1. Again, Wow! I like the imagery (you are always so good with this) – the ponytail, the “jagged thing”. And it is something I totally did not expect – and a feeling I know.

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